This is exactly how I feel about my guy. The rhyming works well, and you've put into words what runs through my head every day. Great job.

Wow who could say it better?

Beautiful poem for someone special. Excellent work.

Aw =D That's so sweet ^_^

Jade

aw~ a very sweet poem~ good work

keep writing!

So pretty. The only thing I noticed is "to me YOU'RE perfect." 7th line. Other than that, it's so short, yet so wonderful.