you can sense the neglect. im sorry about that but its still a great poem! i like how you can put your emotion into words.

~autumn~

hm.. i like this, i hope though that things with your brother get at least a little bit better.

keep up your great writing

-naomi

aw. How could a brother hate his own sister? -hugs- You're special, you have great talent.

Never lose your way.

Whoa this is so good. I like it a lot, very well written. Great poem. V x

Love it, love it, love it, well done, you express so much in a short space and its amazing, and i love the way you describe urself as bloody fingernails, its truly great and a masterpiece, well done!

A typical angsty poem with no rhyme scheme. Try using more than monosylabic words. It would help a lot. the emotion comes clear in this work, though there is too much "fluff".

I know exactly how you feel. My older brother treats me this way too. I'm sorry you have to go through this. Great poem though...

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*