Reviews for They Won't Look At Me

Erin Jane Lingo 2006-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is awesome! I like this... well written... a little odd, but great.
The Dark One 2006-04-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like the rhyming pattern. I understand what is going on but the rhyming really drew my attention.
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 2006-02-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou were right when you said it was a fragmented poem. o.O It was...it appeals to me. ;-; -hugs it- >:D Yes, the infamous e returns.
Novacula Amor 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseVery fragmmented indeed. The way it's put together is very interesting too, as is the poem. I like. ^^
Lostoyannaya 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseWell, for a ramble it's quite concise! It reminds me of a cross-between the text uttered by Poor Tom and the Fool in "King Lear", only in a modern context. I'm fond of it muchly. ~~Lostoyannaya
Cynicalness 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseNot to be rude, but it kinda sounds like a demented Dr.Seuss story.
Vivian Rose Pierce 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseFrantic and moving. Feels a little forced, but it's best that way, I think.
Fyodor Van Doren 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abuseI would say that you should put this in the poetry section, but now that I think about it, it's not poetry. It has no meaning. This is a deconstructionist's playpen. There is no meaning, except to the author. And even then, I'm sure there's little there.