Halloa! You've reviewed tons of my stories (or did when I actually updated...like I'm finally doing again) and I decided I would return the favour. I thoroughly enjoyes this. I find poetry very difficult to write, so those who can do so astound me. Excellent job!

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That was a very great poem, nice flow and v. sad. Good job x

Oh you rock.

I'm not going to pretend i understood that :) But nice vocab.

Who cares about minor errors in latin? Beautiful fabulous poem, Iz. "I trailed my sight/along, between, across" good choice of words, eh. Christy x

Ooh so grainy and lucious, beautiful and classy. I love.

You made a few minor conjugation errors in your latin. A very concrete poem.