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| ossining 2006-07-17 ch 1,   | What a great poem! Glance tag - I have never heard that term before, so yeah, originality points go to you. Way to go. Keep writing! :) |
| les petits bateaux 2006-03-17 ch 1, | Interesting. But good. |
| classic violet 2006-02-20 ch 1, | Love it. Especially "Eyes flickering face to face", beautiful. |
| benji 2006-02-19 ch 1, | nice little piece. Simple-but really really deep |
| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-02-19 ch 1, | I love haiku forms! Very nice poem. One of my fave. haiku on here! Keep up the good work. |
| SilverRain1011 2006-02-17 ch 1, | I wonder that myself sometimes. Perhaps that's why I can't stand to look into people's eyes for very long. I think this is one of the best I've ever read! |
| Teufel66 2006-02-16 ch 1, | Wow at the last line! a very meaningful and well crafted haiku. good one! =) |