hauntingly beautiful and creepy as all hell. i like it

Wow! That's a stunning, and beautiful piece. Since I just got through reading a few chapters in a vampire story...it makes it even more so haunting.

Desire, Beautiful, but judging by the tone, it really sounds more and more like your story is paralelling our own, and even the most wild and fantastic parts paralell ours through metaphors. Give me the context of this, and I can probably guess near to quotes not yet written what Angel's reply is.

i really love this, very well presented and the content is so enticing that it makes you read up until the very end, without pause! Well done!