Another beautiful poem. I absolutely love it! I'm like addicted to reviewing your poetry, and I'm running out of original things to say. However...I would like to ask if I could use some of your poems in a story of mine, as long as I give you credit for them?

Desire, I love the depth of your ending statement, and how it compares shadows in your artwork to the shadow of your life. But do not think that you are but a shadow. say simply, perceived as one by those blind to your hue of light, and repulsed by that shade of a deeper darkness. They know there is the darkness there, but can't face, and won't accept there is light. You have more form and solidity than any shadow I've yet seen.

-Your Immortal

very good, i really connect with the words, especially the last few lines, very strong and deep, well done!

I was told once that noone cares if you write about writing unless you're a famous writer. You are not. Try to find a theme for this poem to mask its true intention (why you write). Hide that away and disguise it as something else.