Haunting and beautiful poetry, as usual. I love the metaphor usage in comparison to an infectious disease. Probably my fault that I actually caught it all, since I'm the one who reads too much.

My Desire, That was beatiful, but I fear people won't get what death means. If I didn't know, I'd think this was about getting AIDS. But I love the whole of it, not just the ideas which I'm connected to, but the punctuation makes it all the more pwerful. Love,Your Immortal

i really like this, with the underlying sexual content it makes for a good read, well done, this is great!

A theme and metaphor that has been (excuse me) done to death. Try to make the idea more original, more [i]yours.[/i]