Reviews for Unintentional Betrayal

Olivine 2006-02-18 ch 1,	i have no idea at all what itis about your writing, but it really drew me in. you put so much emotion in your poems, and i really like that. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:\|:-
Stonecreek 2006-02-16 ch 1,	By the end, the poem has lost its effect for me. Trim it up, cut some stuff out, to keep the emotions flowing evenly throughout the poem. As is, they meander and don't seem to end. Make sure that when you do end, it has punch.