Very interesting...I liked this. Good parrelism(sp?) It sends out a good message. I'm glad you knew it wasn't ok for her to be doing what she was. I really like this. Good Job .

:D I liked the parallelism in this pome. It's very cool. Haha. The first line is very Van Gogh.

This is certainly interesting. o.o;

I kind of like it, actually. I like how its written.

Keep up the good work.

Excellent message! Write on.

Very intersting way of putting it. The shortness makes it more inpactful, I think. Nice job with this.

Thanks bunches for the review! I try to please my adoring fans, darling! I really do! :snickers: I'm just joking. Getting the flower when he had told me he wasn't going to give me one (because I'm "foreign") was a real surprise, and I guess some inspiration got jerked out of me! lol

May inspiration never leave you wanting!

all my love,felicia