I like the way you tackled this idea; it's really accessible and at the same time deep enough to get lost in. Nice work.

I loved this...the image of 'God Fields' is amazing. The little bit of repeating really made it a strong piece, but not overbearing. I liked the second two stanzas...doubt is so, wonderful. Another nice thing about this piece is the way you ended it - "upon the hilltops/across the planes." - great work. Keep writing.