|Reviews for Wall You In|
| chaos called creation 3/24/07 . chapter 1
Oh my god. Ping? ping? That word alone hits the reader so hard. I just might stick one in randomly into a poem now, haha. Great job with this, the imagery is subtle and stunning.
| Halcyon Impulsion 7/5/06 . chapter 1
This is my favorite line:
And hear it hit—ping—
the metallic clink, of a link of my love.
| Moondog Dozier 2/16/06 . chapter 1
This creates such vividly haunting images. Kind of like you guide the reader step by step through this. Very well written.
| ronshaberry 2/16/06 . chapter 1
Wow. That's some powerfully possessive love. Lovely stuff created with sentence fragments. "And something bites./Your fear." is probably my favorite part. So wonderfully ruthless. Yum.