 Dirty-Angle 2007-05-09 . chapter 1Bwahaha... I love it. Take that James Blunt. |
 Ashes.to.Acid 2006-08-07 . chapter 1wow..witty and sarcastic, I like it. |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-07-21 . chapter 1you say so much in so little. interesting reference. |
 Insane-Rassbery 2006-04-14 . chapter 1Very cool. I love the feeling it leaves behind. I like: "beautiful on repeat" and " I could have done that". I want to let the words wrap around me and keep me warm forever.
-Insane Rassbery |
 Arwen Starfire 2006-04-11 . chapter 1like the rhyming and the lingo, and very good rhythm, but I don't quite get what it is talking about. |
 hey maria 2006-04-08 . chapter 1Funny, in a sad way.
...I just imagined what it would be like to listen to that one line, 'you're beautiful' over and over and over and over. Oh God. |
 Sunset Teardrops 2006-04-03 . chapter 1Funny, but the last line added a deep mystery. |
 rubberduckylove 2006-03-19 . chapter 1I don't know why, but I really like this. It's cool. |
 this young lady 2006-02-25 . chapter 1wow.for a haiku this is totally amazing...I'm actually really jealous of it! it really touches your heart at the end.*adds to faves* |
 brevis 2006-02-23 . chapter 1james blunt makes me puke.
it's a great poem though. |
 twenty-second seduction 2006-02-23 . chapter 1something about this hits me hard & i love it. |
 classic violet 2006-02-21 . chapter 1I love it. Great haiku, indeed. Fantastic. |
 frayedlifeforce 2006-02-18 . chapter 1hehe, nice work, i liked this a lot. you did this well especially in the haiku style. keep it up. |
 Teufel66 2006-02-17 . chapter 1I love that song!! lol, but nice poem. =) |
 Faithless Juliet 2006-02-17 . chapter 1Cute - something scares me about that man; his voice or something, he sounds like of like a younger, weirder godfather. Keep up the good work.
Juliet. |