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Qlmmb2086
2006-07-21
ch 7,
abuseThis made me laugh. I don't know what his niece had to do with anything though...
Qlmmb2086
2006-07-21
ch 5,
abuseApparently you like dophins as much as you like dragons :D

You need a poem about dragons, for I am obsessed with them :S
Qlmmb2086
2006-07-21
ch 2,
abuseI like it! People need poetry with punchlines. Unfortunately fictionpress seems to be largely populated by angsty teenagers and the poetry reflects that. I miss the good poetry I used to find... poems that are funy or tell a story and sound like the poet writes because it's fun to do so.
DisturbedKittenWriter
2006-03-12
ch 7,
abuseAdorable Meghan! I like the first and last one best :)
Niyki
2006-02-16
ch 7,
abusethis is adorable!
ronshaberry
2006-02-16
ch 4,
abuseOoh, so clever. I would not have thought of something like this. Good job. I think my favorite is the 'Puppies' stanza. Sweet and... cute...
Meggielu
2006-02-16
ch 5,
abuseSorry. The top dolphins, that was supposed to be bold and italics, but I messed up somewhere in there. DOLPHINS is the title, and then the lines with commas after them are the lines from the poem.

~Bluebird~
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