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Great poem! Well done!

Keep writing!

~Anna~

I don't like this poem.

So i'll TELL YOU SO! I don't like it because it goes against the grain of my thinking. I believe dreams are a reality and enough of mine have come true for me to be sure of that.

I do like your style though, it's a well written work, so don't imagine i'm saying you're a bad writer, i'm not, you have talent.

Another negative though, why do you write favour requests in at the end of your work? It's tacky to do so, if people want to read your stuff, they will, but often it puts people off if you beg of them.

Truly

Alan.