Well, I think both are beautiful.

This haiku is so nice! I liked it, it was very spiritual. I've never read a religious haiku, to tell you the truth, and I'm glad you were the first one I read.

Aw, I think the second one is really cute. And your word choice was unique and beautifully picturesque. Whoa. Sorry for the big word there. Ha ha. I really enjoyed reading this. It's goin' on my favorites.

~ Michelle ;; x3

I like both of them. But the second one is a bit better. they're both good though, very sweet. good job.