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| Negasi 2006-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful it makes me think of a time in my life.. well yea |
| Moosher 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseAww! Such a beautiful and sad poem.. I loved the format, and the rythm. You expressed these heartfelt emotions beatifully with your simple diction and amazing depiction(that rhymes!! Lol).. and it made the poem all the more powerful to me, the reader. I loved it. Fantastic! Keep up the great work! --Much love, Meme |