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| je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really good ^.^ Everybody wants to die happy xD |
| Cindy Moon 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI like the subject matter. Very, ironically, serene.-Cindy Moon *) |
| Arichos 2006-05-08 ch 1, | abuseYou sound really influenced by shakespeare...I find that funny. Funny in a good way. Shakespearean sounding poetryt tells me you have an excellent talent, and you should continue |
| ViciousMan 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the diction used in here - "Rancorous" is one of my favorites. |
| Aku no Otaku 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abusenice. Going up and down with good & bad sides... |
| simpleplan13 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this.. the lines are a little long for my taste, but other than that I love it |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abusewow, how, poeticXD (pardon the cliche of my compliment)~ a touching plea~ truly~ keep writing! |
| poetic abortion 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseka-wa-e (kawaii, i'm not such an idiot with my fan-girl-ism :D). seriously, i am a little perplexed by the style and writing but, otherwise, i am extatic. ~* noelle |
| AllyCred 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was simply beautiful, i love the descriptions and the feelings that radiate from this, its amazing! |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusei don't think i grasp the concept well enough to make sense of the lines. but i can kind of see what you are hinting at. it's nice imagery tho! |
| KonekOniko 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHeh, really didn't expect this from you. It's very serene, but so...questioning. It just felt like one of those pieces where you're too stunned to really say anything after you finished reading (yes, that is a good thing). You left me questioning now... Heh, until next time... |
| Kakyou Takashiro 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusenotions. notions. notions. hm. you need to find yourself. kakyou |
| Chi Ame 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! This is one of those pieces that you read with a faraway expression on your face, letting the words wash over you and the emotions sink into your pores. |