That was really good . Everybody wants to die happy xD

I like the subject matter. Very, ironically, serene.-Cindy Moon *)

You sound really influenced by shakespeare...I find that funny. Funny in a good way. Shakespearean sounding poetryt tells me you have an excellent talent, and you should continue

I like the diction used in here - "Rancorous" is one of my favorites.

nice. Going up and down with good & bad sides...

I like this.. the lines are a little long for my taste, but other than that I love it

wow, how, poeticXD (pardon the cliche of my compliment) a touching plea truly

keep writing!

ka-wa-e (kawaii, i'm not such an idiot with my fan-girl-ism :D). seriously, i am a little perplexed by the style and writing but, otherwise, i am extatic.

* noelle

This was simply beautiful, i love the descriptions and the feelings that radiate from this, its amazing!

i don't think i grasp the concept well enough to make sense of the lines. but i can kind of see what you are hinting at. it's nice imagery tho!

Heh, really didn't expect this from you. It's very serene, but so...questioning. It just felt like one of those pieces where you're too stunned to really say anything after you finished reading (yes, that is a good thing). You left me questioning now... Heh, until next time...

notions. notions. notions. hm. you need to find yourself.

kakyou

Wonderful! This is one of those pieces that you read with a faraway expression on your face, letting the words wash over you and the emotions sink into your pores.