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je suis une pomme du terre.
2006-08-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was really good ^.^ Everybody wants to die happy xD
Cindy Moon
2006-07-26
ch 1,
abuseI like the subject matter. Very, ironically, serene.-Cindy Moon *)
Arichos
2006-05-08
ch 1,
abuseYou sound really influenced by shakespeare...I find that funny. Funny in a good way. Shakespearean sounding poetryt tells me you have an excellent talent, and you should continue
ViciousMan
2006-04-30
ch 1,
abuseI like the diction used in here - "Rancorous" is one of my favorites.
Aku no Otaku
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abusenice. Going up and down with good & bad sides...
simpleplan13
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abuseI like this.. the lines are a little long for my taste, but other than that I love it
mizu no kokoro
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abusewow, how, poeticXD (pardon the cliche of my compliment)~ a touching plea~ truly~

keep writing!
poetic abortion
2006-02-20
ch 1,
abuseka-wa-e (kawaii, i'm not such an idiot with my fan-girl-ism :D). seriously, i am a little perplexed by the style and writing but, otherwise, i am extatic.

~* noelle
AllyCred
2006-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThis was simply beautiful, i love the descriptions and the feelings that radiate from this, its amazing!
breezy nostrils
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abusei don't think i grasp the concept well enough to make sense of the lines. but i can kind of see what you are hinting at. it's nice imagery tho!
KonekOniko
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abuseHeh, really didn't expect this from you. It's very serene, but so...questioning. It just felt like one of those pieces where you're too stunned to really say anything after you finished reading (yes, that is a good thing). You left me questioning now... Heh, until next time...
Kakyou Takashiro
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abusenotions. notions. notions. hm. you need to find yourself.

kakyou
Chi Ame
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abuseWonderful! This is one of those pieces that you read with a faraway expression on your face, letting the words wash over you and the emotions sink into your pores.
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