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| Andre' Betita 2006-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseHmm...this isn't a one-shot is it? I hope it's not. This chapter shows a lot of potential. It's too early to make any conclusions, but so far it's coming along great. |
| Nicolas Forndrale 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseSuch vivid depiction undeniably immerses WAR's readers into its world. A strikingly sharp image of the war's outrage is illuminated in my head as I read through each lines. An utter achievement, I must say! Keep on with your craft, Goddess. :) - Nicolas |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm...makes the reader anticipate...what IS going to happen next? Interesting display of Sakrie's movement...keep it up! ^^ |
| Meathos 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's really good... Only one dissapointing thing about it- it's length. Get some more written! =) |