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| Manuel Fajar 2007-07-10 ch 1,  | abuseinteresting how living abroad and seeing the extent that prejudice exists and is institutionalized in other societies gives me hope that our North American racial divide will disappear in time. after all, all of us were Africans 50,0 years ago. m |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThe ending made me giggle a bit... Nice job. *::~Cat~::* |
| Raiyune 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseMy reaction was quite different than some of the other readers, I think. The end actually made me laugh. But maybe that's because I'm minority, too, and I wouldn't get penalized for a reaction like that. Oh, the irony. |
| Midnight Doorman 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseOK, this is really against my writing policy, because I think that once you write something, it has its own life, and the author should avoid tampering with it, but I feel the need to clarify this one. As the summary says, this is "On Hippocracy." It isn't really attempting to say that "Dem niggers" are the problem, but is supposed to be kind of sarcastic. People of all races, groups, etc. claim to strive for equality, while they use stereotypes in their very arguments, and base their lives on stereotypes. |
| Teufel66 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm not sure how I feel about this poem. One side of me thinks it is somewhat true. The other side of me thinks it's blatantly rude and follows too closely with stereotypes. nonetheless, i respect you for voicing your opinions. -Teufel |
| White is a Sin 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusehey, i like this one! thanks i just read a review from you if i get anymore thanks for them too! ^_^ love ya regan |
| The Sweetest Oblivion 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abusethat was quite harsh, but i guess it really let out your emotions. keep it up |