Reviews for Wendy, or How To Get Rid Of Female Stalkers

Reviews For: Wendy, or How To Get Rid Of Female Stalkers - Reviews: Page 1 of 24

ukranianmira 2008-07-30 ch 20,	abusei love it
Ngoc1231 2008-07-12 ch 20,	abuseWendy didn't tell him that Fleur won't bother him anymore haha. O well, maybe it is a thing that would be told even though it isn't written. It is funny how Val was like in total control of the ploy against Fleur. He started it and finished it also. It was a nice twist to add that Edward and Ellen broke up. Love the story! ~~Ngoc1231~~
ILuvLiesel 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuseThis... this was really good until this line. "For probably the first time in her life, Wendy realised that Theodore’s looks weren’t half bad. He was quite good looking with his dark hair, which wasn’t too long or too short and it fell into his dark eyes graciously. She cursed herself for even thinking about it." Not to put too blunt a point to it, but everyone knows where your story is going already. It's just a little to obvious for foreshadowing, especially since it seems really randomly placed. If you wanted to intone that she's starting to have feelings for him, try something subtle like, "For whatever reason Wendy noticed that she wasn't as opposed to this idea as she'd expected. Telling herself it was because she was happy to help her brother and his best friend out of a jam, Wendy ignored it."
dreamforever101 2007-11-25 ch 20,	abuseHey, as you already mentioned... the ending sure wasnt the strongest point of your story... :P But you started of with a really strong sense of the plot and characters and it was very enticing and amusing to read... it started to dwindle after tho, especially near the end... okok.. lemme just say it... The end killed the story! :( and i really really liked the story too!! (plz dont hold that against me... thats just how i feel) oh well.. i gess i'll live... well refering back to teh parts i did like, you have a very good writing style and you made a pretty cliched plot realy really interesting! which is quite a feat...so good job!! oh and if you have time, can you read/review my story on fp called "First Impressions" and offer me feedback or comments?? thanks, dreamforever101
Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-08 ch 20,	abuseAw that's a sweet ending. It was a bit odd at how quick they made up but since they're... them, it's normal. Nice job :)
Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-08 ch 12,	abuseThat's surprising. Most stories have the brother eventually agreeing and they fall in love yadda yadda yadda, I like the originality of your story. :)
Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseI liekd the first chapter but it felt a bit rushed. Nice job though :)
Dream that was Life 2007-10-01 ch 20,	abuseAw, that was a nice ending. I'm not sure what else to say, but I'd feel bad if I didn't review it after reading all of it... It was really nice! R.
MandisaNivi 2007-08-08 ch 1,	abuseI loved the story when it was just Wendy. But now I love it even more. Great title change.
dancrchick 2007-07-05 ch 20,	abusenice nice... this story was just what i was in the mood to read! Great job.
AJS 2007-06-21 ch 20,	abuseThis is a cute fic and I like the ending. It was cute without being cheesy (: Wendy & Theodore are really cute together. I'm trying to figure out when it was that their feelings for each other changed - after they started pretending, I think. But then again they could have subconsciously liked each other for longer than that, I have no idea, lol. I think you should have come up with a slightly more creative title, just to make things seem more interesting and also so that it'll better reflect the content in the story... not that Wendy isn't in the story, haha. I like how you wrapped everything up in the end, and although Edward & Ellen were a really cute couple as well, it was nice that you showed that not all couples last. I don't think that Wendy should have gotten so mad at Theodore over that, but I guess she was just angry for her friend and he was there to take it out on. I kept thinking that there would be more to the whole Sandra situation, but I guess not. Anyways though, I really like Wendy & Theodore together - they're so cute and they compliment each other nicely (: I also like how you showed how easy it is to not know things about people who you always thought were close to you. But Theodore seems to be able to read Wendy's thoughts and emotions pretty well (: Anyways, cute story! Keep up the good work! -- Alyssa
Daina 2007-06-10 ch 20, anon.	abuseThis sucks,really bad. You writing is horrible.
xOneLastDancex 2007-06-03 ch 20,	abuseHmm, it would seem I haven't reviewed this since the first time. What a sweet way to end the story, firstly. Totally went with my 'Love conquers all' mood I seem to get into whenever reading stories and watching soppy romance movies. I've loved reading it and how real the characters seemed, especially their reactions to events...it seemed that although the plot was cliché, the characters weren't. [So don't know if I'm making sense here!] I've only just noticed your reply to one of my earlier reviews haha. [Changed my pen-name from xRockxDoesxItxBetterx]. I guess I phrased myself wrong when I said I didn't think Theodore was a good person. But yeah, another Janeite. I'm obsessed. Haha. Its all her fault I need my happy endings! :D But yes, overall I have to say it was a wicked story. I really enjoyed reading it and you are an awesome author. I look forward to reading more stuff from you :) God, I write essays! xx.
Kathleen Moon 2007-05-31 ch 20,	abusegreat story...very very very very cute, I must say...:) Keep writing!
Kaede Kitsurani 2007-05-03 ch 20,	abuseThis is cute. =) I'll read the sequel!

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