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| Guacamole 2007-02-26 ch 8,  | abusei love your story! hope you can read mine if you can! |
| Hidden but Seen by All 2007-02-05 ch 8, | abuseOk sorry but Shadow is kind of a weird name and you have GIGANTIC gaps so um yeah good idea though but again MAJOR GAPS! |
| Death'sBestFriend 2006-10-02 ch 8, | abusei loved it and i hope that the others r just as good |
| TheScryer 2006-09-08 ch 8, | abusefoudn you! Howdy... this sound familiry have I read this one? |
| Kirsten Nussey 2006-07-01 ch 8, | abuseAw wow i loved this story, will there be a sequel? I wanna read more *cries*. Seriously though it really was good and thanks for your views |
| xoxstorii-gurrlxox 2006-04-24 ch 8, | abuseOMG! I totally loved this story..but im sad that it ended so soon, yu should make a second one..if love was really like that...i would have wished i was saffire..lol...Like i said...loved it soo muchTaylor |
| Heth 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseHave you ever read the book Twilight? It's a really great book if you want to check it out (if you haven't already) :D I found it at Walden Books |
| Pure Evil Youkai 2006-04-23 ch 7, | abuseLOVED it. LOVE LOVE LOVED. I can't wait to see more romance between Shadown and Saffire, though! |
| pianomasterette 2006-04-10 ch 6, | abusegood chapter! update again soon please~ |
| Pure Evil Youkai 2006-03-26 ch 6, | abuseCiao, Ali! Io amo, amo, amo, AMO questo storia! Aggiornero' al piu' presto! *~Christine~* |
| HereFromNowhere 2006-03-24 ch 6, | abuseI liked the new chapters. Very good description! Sorry I haven't updated my story for a while. I have been busy lately, but I promise to update soon. Again, I love this story! Update soon! |
| Heth 2006-03-22 ch 6, | abuseCute chapter. You still need work in your emotional transitions and development. It's a hard thing to do so don't fret about it too much, when you get it down you can always go back and revise chapters. Anyways, keep writing, yadda yadda yadda, I'm sure you've heard it plenty of times ^.^; |
| pianomasterette 2006-03-20 ch 5, | abuseO great story so far!! Update soon please! |
| Pure Evil Youkai 2006-03-12 ch 5, | abuseI really liked this chapter and can't wait to read the next! Sorry it's been forever since I read it! |
| The Key of Destiny 2006-03-11 ch 5, | abuseSweet story! It was awesome!! |