amazing, readers can really see, hear, and feel the poem, rarely such feat is done in this concise and emotionally-charging manner, one of those poems where you wanna just delve into it over and over wanting to analyze but swept by mood and goes "dang...I like that, just that.." a great work, rock on!

Gorgeous, hon, just like everything you write, in that poignant and touching kind of way. Great word choice, this poem is powerful despite its shortness - in fact, the poem's length and line length add to the overall effect. Nice piece.

-CM

Thats deep. It reminds me of someone I knew a few years ago...Nice job. :)

Love, Kit