wow so powerful and nice imagery. nice work!

i love it, its so sad, painful. but i dont get the ending. "And we thought about the consequences...". ill write you when i do.

I loved the violence in this one. The sheer giddiness of it; methinks a very good poem. Especially loved the lines "because we wanted to see, how fast it takes to get to heaven". So much implied but I'm brain dead at the moment...have to think about this one more.

This has amazing amazing imagery in it. I've been trying to write something similar to this for ages, but you pretty much got it and more. Great write

The idea of colliding into a star and whether or not you would explode is wonderful. The meter gets a bit off in some places, but the idea of the poem is brilliant.

Wow! Wonderful!

You have such a creative imagination. I love it!