Gotta love the emotion in this. Powerful and yet, endearing in some way. Good job, and the last line was very well-written indeed.

Awesome write! Thank you for the nice review. Keep up the great work.

second stanza's nice. i like it! a side effect of love--cool

haha mr. spaceman. god, i know this feeling all too well. it's kind of tragedic in that sense. anyway, beautiful metaphor!

That was so beautiful. You probably get alot of these kind of comments but its oh so true. Love the part about 'our runaway spaceship'

going to book mark this and read it forever and ever

Sorry, i'm a crazed fan

wow... reminds me of Dustin... since distance is keeping me away from him *sighs*

wonderful still!