for some weird reason this sounds familiar... I think you and i chatted this onje up or at least the basis of something like this. Ah well. Nice one even though it seems to be a new format for you.
autumnymph 2006-02-17 . chapter 1
huh?
I'll come back to this poem months/years later after my brains are more functional and matured enough to understand whatever it is you wrote here.