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Eirien 2006-03-03 . chapter 1
I think this is my favourite so far, I love the shortness and pignancy, the imagery is perfect. I can relate to the message, and yes, I simply love this poem, I think it's a masterpiece. Going on my favourites. (Oh, to gratify my perfectionism, would you mind adding a second "s" to "less", there's a typo there. And in reference to some of your other poems, there is an "h" missing in "through", I forgot to tell you there. Sorry I'm such a perfectionist. ;-))
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