Nice ending to the chapter. Steph is clearly resolved to do something and that means that things are about to get rather interesting. :) I hope you update soon.

so far great. keep up the good work!

Cool Brandt has a son!! I can't wait to read about him!! This is a cool chapter!!

Hmm...okay. I want to know what's next.

Ah, yes. I see the emotion in this. Very good.

I just love Ruby. :D I'm glad that Skye is for Steph! OH and what is this about Brandt having a son! wow. there are more people just popping up out of every place! lol. :D this is a great chapter and I can't wait until you update the next one!

Well, I'm kind of back into the swing of things again. Sorry it's taken so long to review, but I haven't been on fictionpress in ages. I really like the new site though. :) Anyway, I like that twist with Steph. I didn't see that one coming. Her change of attitude was a little sudden, but it'll be interesting to see if they get her away from the government or not or if the gov. finds out about her connection with Skye. Hmm... Anyway, good luck on NaNoWriMo; I saw that you are going to participate this year. It's intense.

Interesting Chapters, I'm sorry I haven't noticed them but my Author Alerts don't seem to be working since this site decided to have it lil' make-over, anyway...as I said v. interesting. Brandt has a son? I want more info damn you! Lol. Update soonish...whenever soon may be.

Ciao.

So this Agent 053 seems to have a heart after all.. I wonder how will she reveal her tru background to Skye and the others then.. How come we didn't even know that Skye had another child? How did they kidnapped Agent 053 away from her family? Anyway.. cool chapter!

poor Steph. she should have just ran with them! lol. but i understand. that was nice of her to let Skye go. this was a great chapter!

you must update soon!! :D please and thank you.

Interesting chapter, and I'm sorry for taking forever to review it. Jackson seems interesting...but I can't wait to see what happens next chapter :) So I hope you find time to update soon.

Ciao!

Well, it's nice to know Tessa is making friends. Yes, it's been a while, so I might re-read this later. Please forgive me if I seem a bit... out of context. I think you could be a little more descriptive at places, especially at the end of this last chapter. Umm... I cannot think of anything else to say so... Toodles!

Oh!! Cool!! Who's Jackson's mum? Anyway.. this is a really great chapter!! But sometimes I think you've introduced way too much characters into this story that it makes my head swim!! It's still alright though!! I still like it!!

yay an update! :D this was a good chapter. cliffhanger! i can't wait for the next chapter. poor Tessa. i want Skye out as much as she does. hmm... i like Jackson, he seems really nice. :D okay well, i think that's all i have to say. update soon!

Hmm, ok, let's see how you do the next scene with Steph.