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| luv me like no other 2006-09-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis sounds kind of sad. She really needs to let go, and have some fun, because a planned life, is like life in a prison. |
| a lonely september 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abusemy god. this is incredible. i love your style, and this was just a great poem. |
| addie pray 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. All about that girl in one of your classes with perfectly applied eyeliner and two hundred mini hilighters in her color coordinated binder. I didn't like the middle part, with her wanting to be hugged, as much as I liked the beginning and end, which were well written. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abusereally made me wonder... intriguing point of view~ nicely done keep writing! |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseLovely work...I can relate to the character, in some way...always too busy with her life to notice her Life...it's so sad...great work! ^^ |
| just a teardrop 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow i love how this poem developes, from very rigid and structured at the beginning (which works well with the theme) to the more abstract and experimental ending. gorgeous! |