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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseI love the power in this, and the pride that permeates the poem. |
| Manuel Fajar 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseit's time dragon came out of chrysalis,— so long temerity has ruled with ease, yet now i think that change is in the air, for belching sulfur and pitchforks are seen, and little demons red gleefully play. it's time that something new replaced routine, grown old and dull, with bones of chalk worn down, so that each step, without a cane, comes slow, eliciting a frown upon crown's brow; so tedious and painful was snail gait. it's time for witches their sly spells to cast,— with stormy rains all wood for pyres is wet, so with impunity they can newts boil, to make strange broths that will enchant and slave,— all that in opposition stand in time. |
| Boadicia 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWith an attitude like that, nothing can stop you. Awesome poem. :) |
| a lonely september 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusewow. this is incredible. i know my review won't mean **, dunno if you even read 'em since this is late as hell, but this is incredible. just thought i'd let you know, cos this rocks and i realy like it. i'm not sure what else to say. it's just written so well, with such awesome voice and it's just really good. . . yeah. |
| Crimson-Fantasy 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abusevery nice i love how you adressed all the sterotypes with nothing but cold hard confidence overcomeing obstacles and not stepping down to any man or any self-proclaimed officail; and how you slid pieces of what could even by your real personality to the charictor giving sense of humanity to go along with the stone cold rebel-Kudos |
| forsakensmile 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI love this. The rebellion is just so delicious. |
| are you from mejico 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThe second to last made me like it. So I re-read it. The bit about the pushing down rising again made me think of a pheonix. That was a point I wanted to stop reading. Still. After a bit I cheated and I went to your profile. it says you're singaporean. asian pride. yay. I think I'd be the girl with peroxide though. fun. |
| thursdays and rain 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuse& i'll be your one-'girl' cheering squad any day c: beautifully written & with a hint of sarcasm & humour.. |
| Aimee Raven 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLol, very angry, very convincing and intimidating! Go you! I like it...good job!! And you are right to have this sort of attitude...! Love,Mia |
| just a teardrop 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow! i really like this. some very fiery phrases 'Back off, you bastard, I tell you.' etc. very nice! |
| Ohmm 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, I like this. Some of the phrasing's a bit awkward and all, but what's really amusing and memorable is the unique persona, the wholly funny HEYLOSER attitude. You're that goddess, and you go, girl! |