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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseThe first stanza has some shaky rhythm, not as pleasing to the ear, but I do favor the second, esp beginning with the red flutter. That is quite an interesting image. |
| nevermore, the silent cry 2006-06-19 ch 1, | abusewow. very cool. sorry i haven't reviewed anythign of yours recently, been kinda out of it. bleh. but yes, this beautiful. the end was perfect. |
| Iridescent 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abusewow...great poetry. I really like the words you used, and the way you can write stuff that just flows. |