OMG...This is going on the favorites list. You have done a stupendous job...Words can not describe what I'd like to say. I think this is one of your best that I've read. I have a punched-in-the-guts feel from reading this. It is absolutely incredible. Keep up the awesome work!

~Dying Rose~

Resonant. It reaches into your heart and touches your soul; Shakespearean in its scope, style and intensity: it inspires the spirit to soar.

Another great peice your work never fails to impress me!

Good Job!

Keep Writing!

Can I say this gave me chills? Good chills, but chills nonetheless. Wonderful presented and beautifully written, as always.

Cheers and keep writing.

-Seras

I really love the first stanza and last one

I undergo a graceful sleep,

Reckoning cannot wash

My tainted tendrils mist,

Of soul, of spirits

Reminiscence

So shine your mirror

To another’s wit

For I’ll not shift my

Gaze-Favorite stanza, though it was a hard decision to make - your power of moods and narration never falter to amaze me my dear, I wish that I had your control over the page. Sorry that I’ve been absent from this page recently, I’ve been working two jobs and things all of the sudden got really hectic and all in all life sucks but this wonderful piece cheered me up. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

kind of pretty, in a emily dickenson kind of way. Or whoever that lady was. the hermit... you know her.

OMG! this is like so perfect, its excutally what we are learning in school. LOL, love your style keep it up.

There I was looking for a war poem and some of yours were recommended. "Game of Death", "The Pit", "The Beach" etc, yet the first piece I see when I hit your page is this: "The Drum of War".

At first I couldn't make sense of the title until I was drawn in to one of the best pieces I've read on here!

Fantastic work! I am now off to read the others I mentioned.

GREAT

Thought this was really good. The format of it worked perfectly with the subject matter and the diction was pretty good as well. Good stuff.

Absolutely Brilliant!

This has to one of the best I've seen on here; not that I read a lot of poetry, but a lot that I've scanned on here to be honest pales to this gem. So with this I'm glad I did as I'd nearly given up the ghost.

It's definately got a Shakespearean tone and your use of language is exquisite.

I'm off to read more of your work..

Excellent!