This was beautiful. I can't believe how imaginative you are.

oh...my...gosh, this is absolutely amazing! it's brilliant! the last few paragraaphs are so powerful, the whole thing is intoxicating and twisted in this really addictive way, it's really really wonderful. Fantastic job!

My god, your writing really is incredible. I loved this- it's going on my faves. I would say more, but I really don't know how to tell you how much it rocks...anyway, I loved it.