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| IiotComputerLetMeOn 2008-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a great story! |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-12-01 ch 5, | abuseBeth ann still ** me off, bu the Vampire Matthew is getting ever more interesting. |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-26 ch 4, | abuseVery interesting. "galantine"- guilitine "“You know if you keep acting this way, we will never get along.” Beth Ann didn’t even think Michael was worth the effort of a conversation, so she chose not to answer. She just wouldn’t answer him, and she just stared at him. Should she slap him for such an indecent and despicable comment as that?" who is michael? "Though truthfully, he has been hiding in fear of what might happen to him if the Vampires found him. His duty as what he was is to kill Vamipres and vampires were almost extinct in the Dark Ages because his kind hated Vampires but it wasn’t like his kind was anything like Vampires. Was he hiding now? Was he the almost extinct kind? The war… his family destroyed…Destroyed? Killed off by the one way to be killed, headless will result in death. Vampires tried everything that worked for them, and it never worked. Except when one got so frustrated that he had chopped off a head, and it wasn’t like it wouldn’t work on a vampire either, but it’s the stupidest thing that they never thought of it. It shows how stupid Vampires are. At any rate, the Vampires had tried everything until they figured out how to kill his own kind." I thought he was a vampire Matthew is more of a likeable character than Beth Ann, if she died off in the story I don't even think Matthew would care. She's really snotty towards him. Kyle and Beth desrve each other it seems. Unless there going to be a twist where Beth Ann see's the goodness in Matthew and decides not the be snotty. |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-26 ch 2, | abuseInteresting Characters, nice work. |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-09-24 ch 3, | abuseI thought kyle was the other guy and that matthew was the vampire.? |
| Pineapple Lifesavers 2006-02-19 ch 2, | abuseSo far this is set up to be an interesting story...I can't wait to find out more about Beth and Matthew! Update soon please! |