hey, i like it. but i see u haven't updated since april. please don't give this up.. ;-)

YAY! U updated! Well I liked this chapter, I don't know the whole situation with Brian and the stranger, made Sarah seem more human. What am trying to say is that her contrast of a business women and then being this hopeless person seemed really awesome. Keep it up,and don't forget to update!

This was another great chapter. I also want to see if she and Brian are going to actually stay together. I really liked Brian's attitude as well. Cant wait for the next chapter

LMAO!hehehe, I love stories like this. Brian's pretty cool, being calm and laid back compared to Sarah's reaction. Hope to see more sometime!

I totally agree the second chapter was amazing. I thought it was a great idea to have the guy's attitude to be so laid back. I definitely think this is going to be a popular story. I look forward to reading more.

I like how the guy is really laid back compared to Sarah, it should make for a great story. good job and don't rush, it can sometimes make the story bad. Keep up the good work

Hey! I am so glad you updated. I've been coming to fictionpress to see if you had updated and I am so glad you did. Well about the second chapter I absoutley loved the guy. His casual and laid back attitude compared to Sahar's is fantastic. I loved The second chapter. I will be waiting for the third. Sincerely, LatinEngel

P.S.It's allright if you can't update sooner.

i love it! it's a great story. keep updating^_^

Hey this is the first time I've given a review, so yay for me but also yay for you because I absolutely loved the first chapter and can't wait to read more. The story is great, your writing is great. Amazing!

Great! Simply fantastic. I loved how you described Sarah and her worklife. It made the chapter very interesting. I am also very greatful because you did not have any grammer mistakes. I can't wait for the guy's reaction on the next chapter! Please update!

that was a shocker! With a cliffhanger too I really want to see what happens. Good opener for the rest of the story, keep it up