This reminds me of an anime I once saw. I think it was called Ghost Sweeper Mikami or some such. I like how things seem to be started in the middle, and there are a lot of tales to the side of this story. I don't think that this is an angsty piece, although your main character seems very upset about her cousin's death, but that builds the character.

i really like this.the story so far is very intriguing and i can't wait till you start writing about the Mack. i think you should continue it.