This is so real, so out there that I don't know what to say! It's right in the words, in the truth, in the style you write. Good job! It reminds me of my poem Perfection. Same idea, the things people don't seem to understand. Wonderful, really. Just so original! I feel so overshadowed, but it's all worth it. Very deep! Great stuff you have; treasure it!

-Dynamic Equilibrium

I like this, it has a great truth to this. Immortality, I always believed, isn't worth it. Great insight and great poem.

Vey nice and very true. Immortality is hell on earth; seeing the people you love wither away, for this is the price that you must pay. (Like that? A rhyming review.) Thanks for reviewing my poem.-The acoustic bandit

True. I really like this... nice work.

Deep. And really good. I like your style. It's unique to me.

i totally agree. immortality on earth is basically hell. that's why *certain* religions where your soul keeps on getting recycled in nature don't make sense >_>