Definetly a fav. I love the imagery in this one. And it rhymes, yet in a very good manner. I have never seen a poem like this before. I think there is alot to this poem. Even more than what some may expect. The dark corridor with light under the door (I think) symbolizes the lack of light(or happiness)or perhaps the need to succumb to some terrible thing before happiness can be earned. The child is quite peculiar. The words describing her cheeks also help add to the happiness theory.

And thank you for you reviews. And I am sorry that you're end up leaving many things behind once you graduate. But then there will be many more oppurtunities(spelling?) that await you.Good luck.

Hm methinks I see you is writing closer to the way I format my writings to differentiate...I remember you sayin' this is written to center between two speakers. But usually I sees two maybe even three different little stories speakings.

I'd say its alright...just the ending needs work.

(So sad you diced up your yellow psychyratrist and hid him somewhere in your car...though your conversations with the little triceritops was highly amusing and...less morbid I guess)