Again with great imagery. :-)

Amazing.

That's all I can say.

A very vivid simile, and the emphasis on 'craving' really enhances the fierce emotion. Wonderful!

i really enjoy your writing
im terrible at reviews lol but your pieces seem...clever. odd word ^^;
anyhoosie great job

Wow. Such a simple poem, yet so incredibly powerful. Great metaphor.

Wow, Now that is what I call lust.

Hi!
This is like the shortest poem ever Lol But I like it in some weird way I don't even know So keep writing all the kool poems
Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy

I have to say this one is the ultimate metaphor I have yet read of crave :) blood on tongues of spears...amazing work here :)

I really like Haiku because it can often be interpreted in many different ways and this one is no exception! Cool stuff!

By the way, thanks for your review of my work as well.

i liked this one :] it was good...i always sort of sucked at hikus

WOW. great use of words.
1 question, how did you get so many reviews! lol. must be cause your writing is so great!

Amazing haiku. I loved it. The title made me think of something else, but once I read it, it made perfect sense. Thanks for sharing!

whoa...i love haiku...especially this one. extremely deep and descriptive - i think i jumped back (the title made me think of something else). really cool!

A haiku once written well, can be powerful.

Who'd have thought, 17 syllables could kill?

Hi! I'm futureworlddictator! u sent me a review once and i never got a chance 2 check u out. i totally understand writing random haikus (i do so, too! heehee!) I also like how u pointed out that urs could be related to many different situations, because it makes me think about numerous times where i feel different things.