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| Setsuna529 2008-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseA very vivid simile, and the emphasis on 'craving' really enhances the fierce emotion. Wonderful! |
| .dear. Disaster 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abusei really enjoy your writing im terrible at reviews lol but your pieces seem...clever. odd word ^^; anyhoosie great job |
| nerdwithagun 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Such a simple poem, yet so incredibly powerful. Great metaphor. |
| BahamutsTear 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, Now that is what I call lust. |
| LoSt ReMeDy 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseHi! This is like the shortest poem ever Lol But I like it in some weird way I don't even know So keep writing all the kool poems Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy |
| Fan Fan 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseI have to say this one is the ultimate metaphor I have yet read of crave :) blood on tongues of spears...amazing work here :) |
| Beautifula 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseI really like Haiku because it can often be interpreted in many different ways and this one is no exception! Cool stuff! By the way, thanks for your review of my work as well. |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abusei liked this one :] it was good...i always sort of sucked at hikus |
| PheonixLament 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseWOW. great use of words. 1 question, how did you get so many reviews! lol. must be cause your writing is so great! |
| missboo13 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAmazing haiku. I loved it. The title made me think of something else, but once I read it, it made perfect sense. Thanks for sharing! |
| MistyRose14 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abusewhoa...i love haiku...especially this one. extremely deep and descriptive - i think i jumped back (the title made me think of something else). really cool! |
| Charity F 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseA haiku once written well, can be powerful. Who'd have thought, 17 syllables could kill? |
| Suicidal Romance 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseHi! I'm futureworlddictator! u sent me a review once and i never got a chance 2 check u out. i totally understand writing random haikus (i do so, too! heehee!) I also like how u pointed out that urs could be related to many different situations, because it makes me think about numerous times where i feel different things. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! |
| Frog Tongue 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWonderful. It's an extremely powerful poem, although it's only three lines, it gets across a very strong point. I love it! |