I liked it, but my only problem was that there was a bit of dialogue--no this isn't a flame! I respect you both. I'm just eading this because I thought this might have had something about vampires I could take into thought.

Anyway, I like this story. i'll get around to part two soon.

I enjoyed this story, although a bit of a background to the stories would have been nice. How did Rachelle and her friends become Vampires, were they born that way, it's always fun to make up your own rules.

Anyway, I hope you continue with this series, it's very interesting! :-)

All I can say is wow... and that I am glad you are back!! I missed you!! ^_^ This is a really great story... and I like the change more than I thought I would. A note of advice for you... write by yourself, you write so much better that way!! No offense to your friend or anything. But hurry up with more chapters please... I will be checking in!! Great Job!! ^_^

Go Garret~ He is so hot XD Update soon?

And ... well, I foresee a lot of problem in the future if Will should be a turned and end up staying around for such a long time ...

Is he really gonna get turned? I think he won't make a very cool vampire XD

damn... great chap. in a way im going through that too.. the sweet guy that is amazing and loveable and you know he will always be there.. and then theres the bad boy whos so sexxy you cant stay away yet you know its just going to be for a little... ah ideas?? lol

and here i thought Will wasnt that nice? they should kiss and make up.. then break up, then she should have hot sex with Garret and then get back together with Will for eternity... hahaha

keep it up babez! i love this!

Nik

ooh la la! Shadows of doubt! lol. Keep it up!

Yeah! Another update! It was good... I would say more, but I am uber sleepy!

love it. like always... damn Garrett.. jerkoff, but Will is a vamp now and she doesnt love him like she says.. dun dun dun lol keep them coming babez im ready for more lol

Nik

what can i say.. you are.. THE SH*T! haha that is all i have to say.. do you actually have a band that sings these songs?? if so i want the cd... haha keep up the writing im again in your control.

Nik

this is even better than the original. i can tell that you have matured over the past year, and so has your writing. of course, i have always loved your stuff. keep updating and doing what you do. yours truly,cope

Ooh? Does this mean that all of your fans can get used to a chapter a day? That would be very nice!! I wouldn't want to spend weeks on the computer catching up when I get back from my program!

Hmm... I can't really say too much until I read more... but so far it is good. Keep it up and update really soon! okay?Oh btw, you won't hear much from me past august because I am going on an exchange program! I will be in Japan for 10 months! Just telling you before I forget to.

Hahah I love the ending line XD "I'm sorry, but who are you people?" That was hilarious for some reason ... hahah ...

Very interesting begining though, I see a potentially very good story. I love stories about vampires ... heh, update soon?

interesting... i think i read this before on your sight, and fell in love with it just like Nightshade and the sequel..

you are amazing, but i got a question, vampires at school? is this a night school or are they immune to the light?? just curious. keep it up, ill read it again!!

Nik