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| black*tears*of*innocence 2007-01-01 ch 1,  | abusebeautiful. wonderful. powerful. witty. i love this poem. simple as that. the rhyme is short yet nicely done. the words pack a punch and are full of emotion. and when i read some lines, my jaw fell. the lines are short but they say so much. i can't find anything to criticize. though the lines were short they weren't choppy at all and it flowed smoothly.(*adds to favs*) kudo's to you! very wonderful poem! keep writing forever and always! ~Davida ;P |
| putrescent sanctity 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abusethis is really cool, i love the formatting |
| Unthinkable Things Happen 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abusethats really good keep it up |
| iadisneyprincess 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abusereally liked this. . . i like the way you formatted it too, adds emphasis to all those words. |
| somethingsup 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseIf you remove all the bold, italics, and underlines this would be better. Nothing wrong with the words though. ^_^ |
| Hidden Lies 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, different. Nice work. Thanks for the reveiw! |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuse*dances* Awsome!! I love the way you underlined words and such, it really added to the tone of the poem. Keep it up.--pammy- |
| Aideen-Archer 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like this... but there is no imagry, but it does state exactly what u r feeling, its cool.Kate |
| les petits bateaux 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI felt that the italics, bold and underlining was used too much, though I love the words that you used. Good job. |
| sunday night sky 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abusei love the formatting of this. i like the rhyme. nice job! |