Amazing! the rhyme scheme was terific and you really mad your point loud and clear. great work!

i like your style on this poem...it's creative how you used the same word for the first word of three lines then used another line to tie those three together...great job...keep writing forever and always...please R&R me sometime

Kailee Sage

imagery is breathtaking and stunning. really can "see" what you're writing about. a little depressing and morbid but nothing too shocking. good poem. by the way, you're beautiful