What a creative idea! Frightening how a sibling, who is supposed to be a close and loving companion, can become a killer when faced with the perfection of a brother or sister. Very interesting writing. Did I interpret that right?

Wow...I like this a lot...great job on this...keep writing forever and always...please R&R me sometime...

~Kailee Sage~

Wow! This is so good! I love the last line. It's kind of creepy, but that's okay...because I'm totally not perfect. So it wouldn't hapeen to me, right? Oh yeah, and I don't have a sister. Phew! ^_^ I guess I really shouldn't be worrying. But anyways, this is very beautifully written. Keep it up!