   Isidris Gry 2007-02-28 . chapter 8I like your story. Everything happens so quickly, maybe some detail in-between scenes would help smooth that over. Please update! |
| Bleeding Paper Stars 2006-02-23 . chapter 6 "pansexuality, monosexuality and, this one is my favourite, autosexuality"
What are those three sexualities? I couldn't find them in the dictionary. ;-; And expect another review from me, kay? |
| multiples of six 2006-02-21 . chapter 8 Ooh! I love it. Keep going ... please! |
| multiples of six 2006-02-21 . chapter 6 Oh my GOD. I just laughed out loud. Monosexuality & autosexuality aren't even in the damn dictionary! |
| Rinfirithiel 2006-02-19 . chapter 8 Wow this is amazing so far. Keep it up! |
| wolfiel 2006-02-19 . chapter 8 Wow.. that's pretty amazing. There're a few (very few) minor typos... but other than that, this was great. It all seems so real even though things went by kind of fast. Still great, I'll be waiting for more. =D |
| This Paper Heart 2006-02-19 . chapter 8 Wow. That was really good, keep it up. It's gunna be really great. |
| multiples of six 2006-02-19 . chapter 1 Aww, I like this. Going "this is so bad" in the author's note kinda made me not want to read it, but then I did. And it was cute. And I will read the rest later. =D |
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