Interesting. Nice length as well. Not too long but not too short. (I usually read shorter poems) ^_^

Keep writing poetry!

Love the last line.

Great poem.

"I woke up in the seaMy ship disintegrating around me" ...excellent

~Shavo~

...wow. I just love this. And the ending... "I fell asleep and drowned." A great ending to a beautiful, sad poem... I love this poem. I think I already said that. I'm happy to say it again... Great work!1 I like!1 lots.

~Aquila Strife

i'm in love with it. 'i feel asleep and drowned' what a perfect line.

Great atmosphere created in this. Keep writing