SUPER intense, and dramatic. also sad. fantastic. i LOVED the last line. great job

Wow. This hit me incredibly hard for several personal reasons. It's very well written and very impactful.

♥Christine

*proceeds to cry* oh my word... i think this is some of your best work, and definitely my favorite piece from you. (i can only hope it'll add it on to favorites, if not, sacrifices on my favorites list must be made because this is SO GOING ON THERE) it's sad all the way around. it's really good how you reflect that he ends his life the same way his troubles started. and i love the line "this boy cries." that hit really hard. yes, definitely some of your best work yet.

Very dark and powerful.

THIS WAS A GREAT INTRIGUING SHORT NARRATIVE, GREAT CONCEPT, GOOD JOB !