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| Black and White Dreams 2006-02-19 ch 1,   | very emotional. i really, really like it, but i think there is one little typo there in line three. i think u mean "Lend me your iron will" not "lend my your iron will" very good job though! keep writting! choa! love, caitlin |
| Cloak-of-Shadows 2006-02-19 ch 1, | Very emotional piece here, even with my views. I don't really like perfection if you take a look at some of my writings...tend to focus on human beings inclined towards chaos and all that zaboom... Unless it's something else, a voice of hopelessness and desperation seems to lead this poem. Heh, my view though, please do not get me wrong. |
| sunday night sky 2006-02-19 ch 1, | I love what you've done with 'ana' it works really well. nice job! |