i think its great that ur writting about a problem in ur life!i want to say something though... the last stanza kind of drifts away from the piont of the poem. great job though! keep writting! choa! love, caitlin

Human beings as far as I know can never be truely perfect. Every single person has strong points and weak points.

Stanza four in my opinion seems to end the whole poem from the main idea...if 'I think I have a problem' is the idea. It would in my opinion, be better maybe adding another stanza or something. This is my opinion though ^_^

I can't completely understand what it's like to feel the way you do... I do understand partially. I didn't do that to the point where people started worrying though.

Keep in mind that your friends are just trying to help you see whats best for you. I hope everything works out for you.

Keep writing,

~Rhia