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Reviews For: O! My Beloved Country!
njruk 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
Too god damned right. The US Constitution is THE greatest political document ever written (except for maybe our British Magna Carta ;-)). If only your country had stayed true to those principles...
Chirilo 2006-02-22 . chapter 1
Hello. I'd like to say that I enjoyed reading your poem. Obviously you love your country and want to change it for the better. I notice so many young Americans hating the land they live in and it disturbs me. Through my simple immigrant eyes, America isn't such a bad place to be. Here I won't be spat on or called terrible names, and my house won't be vandalized or burned down because I'm Romani Gypsy. My children have the opportunity to get a decent education and not have to worry about being abused at school or called pikey scum by even the teachers. No, America is not such a bad place to be.

Anyway, thank you for your writing.Chirilo
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
I sometimes feel the same. This wasn't a bad poem, I like it.
The Greymalkin 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
The interesting and very, very sad thing is that you could be talking about practically any country.
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