Lovely. Desperate, but compelling.

Nice! I was thinking of writing a story with this sort of idea, ever since I watched/read Lord of the Flies... I love your pear-shaped coconut named Comrade Napolean, and the beginning descriptions are great.

Keep it up,
Susurrus

Delightful... lol. A one-shot thing, or are you planning on continuing it? I really liked it.

Do you watch LOST?

_R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please!

a bit unrealistic with the journal entry. cos it's a stranded island without pen and paper. anyway, i still like the idea tho. and the last line was amusing. this really reminds me of lost. anyway, nice work!

I like how in the start you create that feeling of uncertainty: "Day 27... or is 28?" The last sentence is definetely a keeper too, about the coconut friend. Reminds me of "lord of the Flies." How everyone is going a little crazy, and some become savages. Very good story, but I wish it were longer.

Tschau,Sam